Its been so long, so long a time.. this song I still sing, n the words don’t rhyme..
as I see this silence, I feel so lonely ..
no dreams, no sleep.. just the eyes wide open..
as I hear my heart pump straight out the cage..
wonder if its anxiety or just plain rage..
to have been so closed behind no bars..
as I feel myself into the world around..
I just slide past my shadow, 2 feet above the ground..
Hallucinations or some wicked dreams,
My heads exploding with these piercing screams..
screams are scarred, like tattoos on my mind..
looking for contention, did I tell u I was blind..
what I look for doesn’t need no eyes,
just this need within and some warmth to melt the ice..
icicle by icicle, with warmth they flow..
the hearts pumping harder, I can sense the glow..
it’s the hardest part till we don’t realize..
but once being felt, there are no more of the cries..
Please tell me what you think
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excellant
This is a really good write, some of the rhyming is a little bit off but this is very very well done i like it alot! i paticularly like the part where you say 'looking for contention, did i tell u i was blind', even the txt talk fits this peice well, very well done xx cheryl -
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thanxs
hey Cheryl..
appreciation is always good..
thanxs again..
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