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In My Name

Portrayals of an inspired mind,
made not by one anima,
but by the many
which sit amid my thoughts.

The visions etched with
syllables and rhythm
are beyond my years --
yet, natural to my head’s
literate whispers.

Captured conversations
that I solely heed (within)
are cast into ink, to be
recognised in my name.

Author notes

Not sure about the title, any ideas?
This is about the "voices" within that I beleive write my poems for me.

GOT HERE VIA FEATURED? PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT EVEN IF IT'S BASIC (although I'd prefer detailed), THANKS.

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  • freespirit51
    January 28, 2007

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    Terrific piece. You have said do much with so few words. Sometimes I believe that is the best way to get your message across. Great job

  • I-Create-Your-Pain
    November 23, 2006
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    i think that this poem is awesome, i agree with lyrebird74 that so much is said in your 3 stanzas, and i think that you have to maybe read between the lines a bit too? but im not sure but overall it is a good poem i love it keep writing
    xxxCheese-Mousexxx


    • silverscent gold member
      November 23, 2006
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      THANKS

      I like to write with room for interpretation from the reader, so the point about "between the lines" is hopefully true. Thanks for reading.


  • Otori-kaeda
    November 23, 2006
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    very good

    it's different, slightly confusing but yet interesting, it gives a sense of wonder


  • Aurielle
    November 23, 2006
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    This is deep makes u HAVE to think.

    "The visions etched with
    syllables and rhythm
    are beyond my years --
    yet, natural to my head’s

    Woah each stanza was incredible
    literate whispers."


  • Lyre-Bird-
    November 23, 2006

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    This is a short write, but so much is said with in your 3 stanzas... You have painted a visual picture with your imagery.... I have just read your notes, and I sit here now and wonder, where it is, or what it is that helps me write my poems.... I like your title it fits well with your poem...
    well written!! keep writing I can see much talent
    Tracey


    • silverscent gold member
      November 23, 2006
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      THANKS

      Thanks for the comment. I appreciate it very much and feel my cheeks slightly rosy now from all the praise.

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