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Passion's Fire

Pressed up against my body
you undress me with your eyes.
Then lay me down beside you
gentle touches make me sigh.

My strength meets your softness
in the quiet of the night.
Loving words spoken in hushes
of our intimate delights.

Held in passionate embrace
my love to you I call.
Holding your warm body next to mine
into love we fervently fall.

Into the sweetness you succumb
to the depths of ecstasy.
Excitement builds, hearts are pounding
we live our wildest fantasy.

Passion’s fire now on high
as we stare into each other’s eyes.
Holding nothing back from one another
as we taste each other’s sighs.

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  • Jessica Lyndsay
    February 26, 2008
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    AWSOME!! I definatley love this write!! You did great job!! I look foward to reading more!! Jess


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 20, 2008
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    Whew~ this was sensational!!!
    great job here


    Delila


  • onesugar gold member
    February 16, 2008

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    I am so glad I stopped by and read this
    So very sweet, passionate and loving
    A pleasure to read
    ~sugar~


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    March 27, 2007
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    Beautifully done.. Very passionate.
    Soulful Woman


  • lovelustre
    December 27, 2006
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    lovely sighs...


  • Trisha W
    December 20, 2006
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    WOW!

    This is a great write! This person is a very lucky girl, you know, having you write something so sweet, yet passionate, since it’s coming from your heart…awesome! It’s just like I like reading them! I’m going to add you to my favorites so I can check out more of your poetry…keep writing.


  • Angels Delight
    December 20, 2006

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    Beautiful

    I am really impressed because you guys work so well together and I love reading these pieces...I was swept away with this one and happily so...

    Thank you for sharing
    Much Love
    Tessa


  • Desire gold member
    December 5, 2006

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    Wow-

    Another Masterpiece You both have Created and I ditto the words of all who have spoken before me~
    Thank You both for sharing Your talent~

    Keep those Love writes going and the
    passion flowing~~
    Can't help but smileafter inhaling this~

    Best wishes to You both~
    Love and Light
    Day and Night~

    Many blessings to You both
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • tanzanite
    December 5, 2006
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    Tasting sighs - lovely

    Oh how I love the line:

    as we taste each other's sighs.

    What a lovely sensual image you had created here. Ny humble opinion is that this was strikingly sexy and beautifully done. This was an image of making love and it is beautiful.


  • luckynsincere
    December 4, 2006

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    beautiful!!

    This is sweetly divine. I love the softness of your words. I also love love love the ending... beautifully said.
    Melanie


  • Dalaney gold member
    December 3, 2006

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    Melting

    Just love poetry that makes me
    wiggle my toes and feel flushed.
    You have done this with your
    exceptional pen and warm heart.
    Love,
    Lane


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 22, 2006
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    "Holding nothing back from one another as we taste each other’s sighs." Sighhh, indeed...A vivid penning, overflowing with elegant language...a sensual portrayal of Love's gifts...Well done, you two... Wanda


  • JoyfulWriter
    November 22, 2006

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    So amazingly beautiful and breathtakingly sensual.....loved reading this....a joy to read....keep penning....smiles, Terry

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