Eyes of blue.
Hair of gold.
My little girl.
Just one year old.
Soft little hands.
A happy smile.
God didn't say.
You were only.
Here for a while .
Way back then.
My life was complete
To be your mother.
Life was so sweet.
To teach you.
Everything I know.
Two watch you daily .
Play and grow.
The memory's now.
Bring joy and pain.
I will never
See your face again.
My heart is broken.
For ever more.
I long to be.
At heavens door.
To hold you.
In my arms once more.
Author notes
I MISS YOU BABY
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A contest entry
- BABIES by Anulekha.
400 points, ended January 2, 2007, 23 entries
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600 points, ended February 2, 2007, 65 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Wow - This is so beautiful - great write - Thanks for entering!
Wow - This is so beautiful - great write - Thanks for entering! -
wow...
very heartfelt...i loved it...a few spelling and grammer mistakes ...the second stanza needs some attention. otherwise..pretty good. wonderful write dear and keep writing.
rent
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beautyfuly sad , this one almost made me cry , please keep writing and good luck in the contest "anything goes"
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i like the poem. you and your child will see eachother again. when i dont know but you guys will be reunited. keep up the good work and good luck in the contest.
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Very Moving
This is a very sad and moving write. I'm sorry for your loss. I like that you are looking toward heaven for your reunion. Congrats to you on the Gold trophy! Many Blessings to you, FAH -
I'm so sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful piece good luck in your contests! <3
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This is really sad! I'm in tears and I am really! This is an excllent poem though great flow and rhyme! Great Job!
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AWWWWWWWWWWW oh man that is a TEAR JERKER...I am awwwwww I have nothing to say about that. Good rhyming and good tone. I am sorry about that...good write though and good luck.
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