Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

11-21

i can forgive all the lies
except the ones i believed

i can forget all the fights
except the ones i lost

i can turn my back on our past
but not our future

of all the things i learned from you
of all the things i thought were true

for all the things i never said
all the noise that's in my head

i can't hold on i can't let go
i can't say yes i can't say no

when you love me you leave me
when i love you you need me

together we're better off
alone

alone
we're better off together

for all that i gave and all that i lost
for all that i loved and all that it cost

i can say goodbye to you
but only if you want me to

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • nolazydaizy
    November 24, 2006
    Edit | Reply

    ahh!!!

    omg, i can't believe i'm actually reading a new post from you. this is amazing and fantastic. i'm so glad you decided to share something. it's wonderful, but that's no surprise. oh yay. i hope this means you're back.


    • luckhole
      November 25, 2006
      Edit | Reply

      haaa!!!

      it's too soon to say whether i'm "back" or not. but i haven't given up completely, so that's something.
      thanks for your kind words, it means so much to me that i'm not forgotten!
      i've been hesitant to post my "boyfriend just left me" poems, because they are invariably self-serving and usually boring to boot. but what the fuck, my boyfriend did just leave me and i can cry if i want to!
      thanks again!

      • nolazydaizy
        November 25, 2006
        Edit | Reply

        hmmmm

        i'm sorry to hear that your boyfriend just left you but i gotta say - he must be mentally challenged. i can't imagine why anyone would leave someone as awesome as you. as a matter of fact, if i liked girls i think i'd be all about you, lol. chin up.

        • luckhole
          November 26, 2006
          Edit | Reply

          chinning up

          he is in fact mentally challenged, insane perhaps. i should thank him for making sure i never end up with a guy like him.
          anyway! thank you for your sweet (~and somewhat alluring~) words. you always make me smile!