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A Journal of Cinese Class- Incomplete

Dull, dreariness settles upon the class
Sleepwalking montones fill the mind
The teacher walks,
singing in an offkey voice

wo de pen you

the class chants back
minds far away
dreaming of a time-
the bell rang,

signalling their freedom

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  • Isidar Mithram
    December 5, 2006
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    Very nice. Got out chinese class exactly in 12 lines..


  • tawk gold member
    November 22, 2006

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    Oh daydreaming in school I remember those days. Excellent write makes one think,