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And the monk swaggered with Humility



Change it over
Like a skipping record
Playing
Over
And over
And over
Over and over again

My mind is
Quite frail
My mind is quite
Quite
Undone
So prone to repeating
So prone to defeating
All purpose in my life

Change it over
Like a tire lost its air
Like it’s spinning
Round and
Round
Round and round again

My hips are
So brittle
My hips are so
So
Collapsible
So used to being winded
So used to being grinded
So used to
To being
Ruptured

Over
And over
Again

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  • lively banter
    November 22, 2006

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    There is a lot of repetation in this piece, and it seems to have a similar feeling to your other new pieces. I wish I could go there and give you a big hug. I love you.