Set my alarm clock -
To four A.M.
It's two already,
So I guess I'm damned.
Promise everyone
everythings going to be alright.
I'm just too tired,
and not feeling quite right
My emotions are so drawn
all because of the dawn.
I know you're so worried,
but you should just let me be.
I'll get over this,
and then I'll get back to you.
Set down the alarm clock,
So I'll fall out of bed.
Some times I wonder -
should I just play dead?
I'm not gonna make it through the week
If I stay up this late,
If I lose any more sleep.
Well,
My emotions are so drawn
and it's all because of the dawn.
I know you're so worried
but you know you should just let me be
I'll get over this,
and then I'll get back to you.
So don't you worry,
I'll be fine - someday
and you shouldn't worry anyways
thanks for your stories that touch me in every way.
You just saved a life today...
I'm sorry if I broke your heart tonight
Yanno by morning - I'll be alright.
I know, you're worried but
you know you should just let me be
I'll get over this -
and then I'll get back to you...
Author notes
This is a set of lyrics I think I wrote a night I was sick. It is a funny story - I feel asleep starting this off when pen and paper in my hands. I woke up with a finished piece. How is that weird? I wish I could copy it to show you - but some of it is in my handwritting, and the rest looks like some one helped me. I know it's just my imagination but... Some one is watching over me. Some one like you guys, my friends. And I would like to say thank you and how sorry I am for not being there for you lately, and also thank you for being understanding of how very sick I am. I hope this set of lyrics doesn't lie, and I do get better.
Thank you.
Love you.
Praying for you.
Bryan, Carnelian Hope.
Please tell me what you think
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very good!!!! i love that it repeats....like a chorus
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awwwwwwwww!
such a sweet write sweetie! were you sick! heee`heee! loved it!
muaaaaaaaahz
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AWESOME
You always have the best ones to read. I am always there for you like I am there for your mom. Keep up the great work. Sorry took me so long to get back to writing. With Scott getting ready to leave is when it all came back to me lol.
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OMG!!!
my poor baby! *gives you a bottle* i want you to feel better because you told me on the phone yesterday that you weren't feeling good still. i like this though, nice rhyming scheme but it makes me very sad in a way. but! doens' matter and i'll still ramble on and on about how i love you and your writing! bye bye, love!
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OMG!!!
Awww Shinkirou, hun. You're luck I don't track you down and Glomp you!
*GLOMP!* I feel a bit better and I think my throat is getting there as well. I have been eating ice to help it along. see you later 
Loves!
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wow. that really is amazing. this poem not only came from your mind and intellect,it obviously came from your heart and something deeper. as you have said,someone is there watching over you. not only us here on ap,but i also believe it is god. i'm sorry you're sick,and i can see in this poem your revocery,on not only your sickness,but on yourself. it sounds like you've been down lately,but that,something greater came to tell you that it's okay,and to tell us that you'll be okay. this was a beautiful piece. like most of your work. just unblievable bry. *autumn*
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wow.
Thank you so much Autumn. Text isnt much, but it gets me through everyday knowing I have people like you out there for me. I'm not sure if theres a god but I'm sure I will find out later on in life. I'll be sure to tell him he has got some wonderful, beautiful, and amazing people coming on the way.
-Bryan
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Bryyy eating well? getting enough sleep? staying warm? I've been through the list with you already, but still, take care of yourself, okay? Great piece, love the hope in it. Everything'll be fine!
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Thank you so much Rooibos You guys have always been there for me and it really means the world. Thanks!
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Aww
Bry I didn't know you were sick! Shows ya how much I know! Get Well Soon buddy! Loves ya!'s & 
es!
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Aww
Thank you so much bend glad you liked it! Im feeling better, and I really think its because of you guy's moral support. Thank you so much
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