My sugar-rush-delight,
My shining star, my light.
My hope, my love, my inspiration,
Your smile, my all, my day and night.
My sun-shiny day,
Amongst the sky full of rain.
My prayer, my plea, my remedy,
Your voice, my rose, the only way.
My golden-tear,
My renounced fear.
My step, my skip, my leap of faith,
Your gentle touch, the sweet melody I hear.
The honor bestowed,
My rejoice, my joyful ode.
My truest friend, tis my regret,
Your words, my apoligetic palinode.
My sugar-rush-delight,
My shining star, my light.
My hope, my love, my inspiration,
Your smile, my all, my day and night.
Author notes
I wanted to brighten up this page a little...and forget my past, my lesson-filled past. Enjoy!
Please tell me what you think
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i like the choice of words you used.
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I LOVE IT! this is your bet write in a long time!!! woot woot!!!


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Wew, thanks a ton Brett!
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I LoVeD iT!!!!!
OMG I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT!!! It reminded me of the good side of my ex who i still love but this piece was really good. Your smile, my all, my day and night, THIS IS THE PART I LOVED it brought back so many good memories i had with him. The Title was excellent it drew me to read the poem. Good flow everything was good KUDOS!!!



