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You Are...

My sugar-rush-delight,
My shining star, my light.
My hope, my love, my inspiration,
Your smile, my all, my day and night.

My sun-shiny day,
Amongst the sky full of rain.
My prayer, my plea, my remedy,
Your voice, my rose, the only way.

My golden-tear,
My renounced fear.
My step, my skip, my leap of faith,
Your gentle touch, the sweet melody I hear.

The honor bestowed,
My rejoice, my joyful ode.
My truest friend, tis my regret,
Your words, my apoligetic palinode.

My sugar-rush-delight,
My shining star, my light.
My hope, my love, my inspiration,
Your smile, my all, my day and night.

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I wanted to brighten up this page a little...and forget my past, my lesson-filled past. Enjoy!

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  • kaitlynann
    December 10, 2006
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    i like the choice of words you used.
    good write.


  • Magik
    November 22, 2006
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    I LOVE IT! this is your bet write in a long time!!! woot woot!!!


  • Firegirl86
    November 21, 2006

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    I LoVeD iT!!!!!

    OMG I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT!!! It reminded me of the good side of my ex who i still love but this piece was really good. Your smile, my all, my day and night, THIS IS THE PART I LOVED it brought back so many good memories i had with him. The Title was excellent it drew me to read the poem. Good flow everything was good KUDOS!!!