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Understand

You think no one understands you
And because of that they don’t
You think no one cares about you
And now they always won’t
You said that it was my fault
Does that make it true?
Hmm, well, I guess it does.
After all, it was said by you.
Since, of course, you never lie
And you could never be wrong
And if all of that were true
Would you sing this song?
This song of lies, I mean, half-truths
And everything in between
Everyone, you must believe her
Would she do something mean?

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Written for a certain someone, who desperately needs to wake up and smell the roses.

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  • hellyes45x
    February 16, 2007

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    I absolutely love the first four lines. I can sense a lot of anger in this poem. I also love it because I can relate it to a lot of people i know. Great Job


  • Ethereal One gold member
    November 23, 2006

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    very expressive

    Wow.........I have known many people with this attitude. Your words are so true. I really like this line:
    "Does that make it true?
    Hmm, well, I guess it does.
    After all, it was said by you."

    Such negative thoughts and emotions make it almost impossible for anyone to like or understand this person.
    Great write!

    Ethereal Melody


    • Ceasement
      November 27, 2006
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      Thank You!

      Thank you very much, for the comment and the applause! -hug- I'm glad you liked it!