I look
lovingly
at my lasagna
especially the top
where the contours
of melted cheese remind me
of that picture of your torso
your soft skin so smooth
the curves so gentle
the skin stretched
just the way the
cheese stretches
making me consider
caressing the lasagna
and eating you
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hahahaha
our love is like spaghetti.. all twisted and tangled and it sure is tasty -
Sensual Sculpture
Ah, you do form poetry so exquisitely well! As easy as eating lasagna, you let your thoughts and memories stretch into a delicious exchange of elements, which instigated a smile and a giggle.
How tactile your poetry, and how ticklish!
I am considering eating the lasagna on this screen -- and caressing you!
Love
Always Myra
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Soup's On!
I'd let you.
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oh my. haha, i love this so much.
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OK!
Let's do lunch. -
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sounds like a plan
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Oddly enough I'm sitting at my desk eating a toasted cheese sandwich...don't think I will ever look at melted cheese the same way...Well done my friend
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MMMmmmmm Toasted Cheese Sammich!
The secret to unlimited joy is to see expressions of love in all things. Like I see it in your comment. Thanks.
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hehe cool poem. keep up the good work.
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Yummy
This is a witty and funny little write, left me smiling and hungry LOL, great job here Al, dont think i'll ever view cheese in quite the same way again -
wow
ha ha ha edible honey ha ha ha..well i have been compared to some things in my time (luckily mostly nice things) but never NEVER melted cheese..ah well thay say there is a first time for everything and i guess that this is a first for me ha ha ha..great work with the provided title.keep it up ,we all love a little nibble now and then ha ha ha
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Ha ha ha
Yeah, like I'm a little nibbler. NOT!
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