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Hair Of The Dog(Limerick)

A quite nutty fellow was Ollie
For biting his friend Dolly's collie
Got a mouthful of hair
The collie did not care
Said Ollie t'was folly by golly.

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Silly.
Written May 9th, 2003

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  • Lanasaur
    February 2
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    hehe

    this is very funny thanks'a'lot
    xxlana

  • ecrivain01
    May 12, 2008

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    Yes, it is cute ...

    but there's no zing here. The final line in a limerick is supposed to be the punch line so to speak. This is silly, yes, but to me, silly is not funny.

    Better luck next time.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 15, 2007

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    i love limerick i thought this was absolutely cute love you impressed me dear. i hope to read more soon


  • Janice M Pickett
    November 21, 2005
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    heheh Funny and cute
    Thanks for the entry
    Hugs


  • YourMomWritesPoetry
    July 30, 2004
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    aww that's so cute. lol. I, too, am I bit curious on how a collie would taste but not as curious as I'd be if someone actually knew....lol. thanks for entering my contest and good luck

    ~Frankee

  • Cheetahspencer
    July 5, 2004
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    ok

    interesting, how does a colly taste someone tell me

  • Juicebox
    July 2, 2004
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    Very good, I liked it! Thanx for enetering, and good luck!! ~Jo~ xx


  • MissPumpkinKing
    May 9, 2004
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    hehehehehehehehe this really is very splendidly funny!!! good luck in mi contest
    lil bass
    xxxxxxx

    ps do u kno where i can get a monkey?


  • WanderingSoul
    May 10, 2003
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    Very Cool

    LOL That was cool. I don't read too many limeric's, I've even forgotten how to write them! Ahhhhhh!
    Cool write though. Very refreshing!
    Keep it up!

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