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Santa's Helpers!

Shush! "Don't wake Santa," the elves say while working into the night.
Ahah! "I've got it!" one excited elf says, while working on a new toy.
New
Toys
Are great!
Santa, I've got a new toy!

Hooray! "That's great!" Santa replies.
Elves "Hurry up! It's almost time!"
Let's go! "Come on!" one elf says to the others.
Psst "That's on the wrong way, here work on this toy instead."
Eeyore "Where did my new Eeyore toy go? That toy is very special!" a worried elf asks.
Right here "Here it is!" another elf replies.
Santa "It's time to go! Let's load the toys!" All the elves yell for Santa.

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  • Elvenfairy
    November 23, 2006

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    cute

    this was a cute poem that showed the rush of christmas time. Very nice, thanks for enetring my contest