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Whats happened to us?

All we do is scream and shout
You tell me things you dont like
And things i need change
I change them

Notice no earings
Notice no heals
Notice i dont wine about me
I've done it all

All im asking is to talk
Talk about whats wrong
Instead of telling other people
And them getting invovled and in the way

I miss you corse i do
But im trying not to think
About those hugs i used to get
All those kisses

How when its our day
Some friend ends up interupting
Or coming over
That not rite

But i dont say anything
I just get on with it
Yes i should calm down
Somtimes

You need to see though
The things ur doing wrong
Those things that make me think
And wonder

Have i made the right desition
Do  you fully want me
What have i done wrong now
Whats happening to us?

People tell me we wont last
I want to prove them wrong
Show them we work
And our love

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letting everything out of how i feel at the moment so comment as u like

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  • fish airways
    November 22, 2006
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    nice

    i agree with danny, were u not the one that told us all to go away? although u mite be talkin about missing someone else, and how someone else used to kiss u, i don't no. not everything revolves around me, i know.


  • perfect-cadence
    November 22, 2006
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    nice poem but i don't understand, wasn't it you that blew everyone off? not the other way round