There are days
That I just don't know
What emotions
Are going to show
Sometimes I wake up
Tear drops falling down
Like the rain
And I begin to drown
Hoping for the sun
To shine its warm rays
Upon my cold face;
Mend the endless frays
Beyond my control
Feeling so numb and alone
Wishing that this
Was not which I was prone
Can't feel the glow;
The ecstacy of happiness
Just the thoughts
Leading me to lonliness
Sometimes I wake up
Tear drops falling down
Like the rain
And I begin to drown
I need to stop this cycle
But the cause is unknown
So until its discovered
I stick to this eratic tone
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
pretty good... seems like a song in a way with the repeat of a verse... im not used to this new allpoetry... i think i should get on it more...
and my poem... i feel that way a lot... its snowing and made me think of whats goin on in my mind more when i was driving home from work
Adding your comment:
