Enter gently
into these
wildflower fields,
lay down
your weapons
and shed your armor…
without fear
Come, and let me
love you.
Let me shine my light,
into your darkness.
Let me show you the power
of my unwounded warmth,
open your heart
I will cause you no harm.
I swear this on my bones.
Listen to the echoes,
of the blistering wind,
It whispers,
Your name.
Watch the nights sky
and see the starts align
I will behold you.
You are not lost, my love
I have found you,
here and now.
You are not forsaken
for that could never be.
Step into the sacred circle
Of my embrace
I shall tell you secrets
We shall yet discover…
In this single,
moments dream.
A contest entry
- Love and Hope by sunshinegirl.
300 points, ended December 1, 2006, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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"Let me show you the power of my unwounded warmth" I like that.. way cool. :
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Wow this is a beautiful piece of poetry. Its so pretty it makes me smile when I read over it. I love it so much! You have so much talent, it gives me both a sense of security but also of happiness,
xx
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This is very pretty. So tender are these sentiments as to make me want to dream again. Simply superb presentation my friend.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do appreciate it very much.
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Honey! Uplifting and Emotional
It's as sweet as you, showing the reflection of you in these lines you've written full of passion..may nothing could ever stop...the brightness of hope...you have lighted within...your heart and soul. It's very beautiful hope you have given everyone and in life we all should hold on to hope until the last breath.
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A beautiful piece
A wonderful piece of writing here. Such emotions again, hit home. Your words flow like fine wine. Keep it up, you have talent.
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Uplifting
wow, Thank you so much.
Even in your comments you are quite poetic...
"flow like fine wine."
Thank you again
-Blessed be-
SKy
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Thanks for the entry into the contest. This is wonderful, and it is full of love and hope. This will mean the world to the one it was meant for! Best of luck in the contest. I will leave full critiques at the close of the contest.
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Grace in Embrace
"Step into the sacred circle
Of my embrace
I shall tell you secrets
We shall yet discover" yes dear Blanche, Embrace is the flowered nest of Cupid, the god of all lovers in romance!I liked these lines the most! -
Good
I liked it. Its so gentle and really sweet. I think its really good.
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