Why oh why did you go away
Did I deserve this fate
Was it something I did say
Why oh why did you go away
When you said you would never stray
Forever would be my mate
Why oh why did you go away
Did I deserve this fate
Where oh where are your sweet kisses
When can I stop feeling sad and blue
Without you life an abyss is
Where oh where are your sweet kisses
Will again I know what bliss is
Will we once more be a loving two
Where oh where are your sweet kisses
When oh when can I stop feeling sad and blue
When oh when will you come back
I am miserable without you
Truly my life is out of whack
When oh when will you come back
Get our romance back on track
Change my hue to pink from blue
When oh when will you come back
I am miserable without you
Author notes
Lonsome me
In a list
A contest entry
- Triolets by individuality.
600 points, ended November 25, 2006, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Phenomenon #2 by Ryno.
300 points, ended February 9, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hmm, creative. I enjoyed the parts on it, it showed great penmanship and was very soft, but tragic. Thanks for entering.
~Ryan~ -
Did I decerve this fate - deserve
Will we once more be a lovig two - loving
When oh when can I stop feeling blue - this line is not the same as the other!
i wish that you have good luck in this contest you have entered. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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