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All for me

Slam the door
Lock out the world
My heart has felt enough for you
I'm stretched to the limits
          About to break
        But I won't,
I'm too stubborn
So instead I'll turn up my music
Block out the world, block out my pain
And slit through every layer
Break through every lie,
    and find myself
Until I don't need to pretend anymore
I'm tired of bleeding for you
So tonight, this is all for me.

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Yeah.. so this is a poem... that I wrote

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  • Crazy-Dan
    November 21, 2006
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    ummm...

    who were you slitting for before?


  • Goodolenad
    November 20, 2006
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    oh honey, i hope i shouldn't take evrything in here literally. slit? no. no.

    the anguish is so raw in here, it sort of overwhelmed me. take the night into your hands, make it your own. don't forget about yourself in the process of helping someone else.