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All you see is two men kissing
All you see is that it's against your religion
All you see is their going to hell
All you see is that it's wrong
But you don't see the love in their eyes
The passion they have for each other
A love that is refreshing to see
A love that can withstand all odds
This love is true
This love is real
Just look
And don't judge by what you see
See the love
The passion
The emotion
The coming of two people
Your noses turned so up in the air
I'd be honored to know how they kept that love alive
For so long
But, for now I'm only outside looking in
Author notes
I hope this is what you are looking for please tell me if it's not and I'll delete it from your contest. 
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A contest entry
- True Love And Passion by Carus.
300 points, ended December 3, 2006, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Love Gays! by half-interested.
300 points, ended February 28, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make me feel. . . anything. by Cavca.
500 points, ended May 21, 2007, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Love Gay People by ISheHer.
375 points, ended June 23, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I loved it. Actually made me smile at some parts. People are so closed-minded some times, and refuse to think for themselves so they let their pastors tell them what is right and wrong. Glad someone had the guts to write about this.
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hmmm. i like it. it shows how society never accepts diffent things. its good.
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It makes me smile. My mother is a lesbian and it really does make me happy to know that there are people who don't instantly judge others. I love the first stanza. The flow works well. And you passed. It did make me feel. Thank you. Good luck in my contest.
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WRITE ON!
Sorry about the cheesy pun. THIS IS GREAT! I hate it when people don't like homosexuals just because it goes against some religon. Wonderful write!
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3 Thumbs Up !!!
Ha!
If their not in love and just in lusting passion, and they fuck unmarried, then they would go to hell !
if you believe in that faith stuff.
-cheers
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OMG ... how sweet ... Your so much like me it's not even funny ... I would love to have some of the passion and love as those two men ... you did a great job sweety ... my good god ... you don't know how happy that made me to read this piece ... good write babe ... keep writing and keep on smiling
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Thank You So Much!!
Your making me blush over here LOL! I'm just glad to be able to write about this subject and people don't realize that you should judge people based on what they see. Thanks again for your comment!! 
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Oh, no need to delete is, sweetheart! I really liked this poem. It flows nicely, I like the words and the simplicity helps with the message. I do think it needs a spot of punctuation, but that is just my personal opinion Good luck in the contest, and not to mention...thank you for entering!
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I outta thank you!
For hosting such a great contest! I wanted to write about this subject. And I'm glad that you gave me the opportunity to do so. Thanks again for your comment!
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