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My Romeo

I've been waiting here
My Romeo
I have shead a tear
My Romeo
Won't you come with me
We can be so free
My Romeo
My Romeo
* chorus *
I need you here
I need you in my life
I need you to be near
I want to be your wife
Can't you feel my pain
I need you all the time
I standing in the rain
I want you to be mine
* end *
Don't leave me here
Come walk with me
Don't be far, be near
Come talk with me
I need you, I need you
I need you in my life
I want you,I want you
I want to be your wife
* chorus*
* chorus*

Author notes

I wrote this after I read a poem about a girl that loves this boy, only mine is a song that is the heart of that poem

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  • Andy Stephenson
    May 2, 2007

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    Thanks

    Thanks for entering my contest. I really appreciate it. Do you have a melody for these lyrics? Do she and Romeo get together?

    Andy


  • Angel-Crestfallen
    April 26, 2007
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    Good

    Avery nice song ... Well Done


  • Game Master
    November 20, 2006
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    Love

    This song is about love, how a girl wants a boy and how he left her. She needs him and wants him