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Freddy Fibroid and The Jets (11 in all)

Freddy Fibroid was  a soloist singer in
Clarise's Uterus.Then he met the Crew.
He called them the Jets.

Now Freddy and the Jets partied all
day and all night. Feeding off of
the Hormones of life.

Freddy got beside himself and wanted
more than what was in front of his
sight. He told the Jets he was busting
loose.

Out he went into a new world outside
of Clarise's Uterus.
Little did Freddy know that he was about to
be the King of poor Clarise's insides.


Greedy Freddy is eating up all
Clarise's nourishment now.
Poor girl every time she looks at water
she has to take a pee......

And speaking of Pea's all she
has to do is eat one and dinner
is done.

The Jets are looking for Freddy
but he has a great hiding place.
Too bad it is on Clarise's Bladder.

Surgery is coming without a doubt
then poor Freddy and the Jets
will no longer have a place
to spend the night.


Yvonne J. Griffin
11/20/06


Author notes

this goes out to my sister.... May surgery go well for you... it did for me...

Yvonne

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  • Summer Dawn
    November 28, 2006

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    lovely

    very confusing as to what you are really talking about, but that is great in poetry. it can take your poem to all kinds of levels to the one reading.


  • Roseleaf
    November 21, 2006

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    very interesting piece and hope it builds up your sister

    Love
    Pauline