Lonely soul selling flowers
in the rain.
Nobody notices
Nobody cares
The storm rages on
Nobody notices
Nobody cares
Still she waits
for somebody
anybody to notice
As the storm rages on
Nobody notices
Nobody cares
Looking for a lost love
in the souls that go by
As the storm rages on
Nobody notices
Nobody cares
Hoping against hope
they'll meet again
As the storm rages on...
A contest entry
- Welcome ladies and Gents by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
450 points, ended July 11, 2008, 77 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Powerful mom my favorite has to be when you wrote thisStill she waits
for somebody
anybody to notice
As the storm rages on
Nobody notices
Nobody cares
Looking for a lost love
in the souls that go by
As the storm rages on
Nobody notices
Nobody cares
Hoping against hope
they'll meet again
As the storm rages on just awesome. -
a good poem/song, the repetition worked well here, nto overloaded. good luck in the contest. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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Thank you so much for resubmitting this poem for the second round of the competition. I like this poem more every time I read it.
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Another great poem. You sure are making it hard for me to pick a favorite between these two. This poem uses few words but tells a huge story. I especially like the the recurring stanza.
As the storm rages on
Nobody notices
Nobody cares
You have written a very insightful poem and I really enjoyed reading it.
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