Wanting
Yearning
Needing
Waiting
Aching
Bleeding
Participating!
Biting
Growling
Kissing
Pawing
Petting
Sweating
Anticipating!
Grinding
Finding
Learning
Burning
Stroking
Smoking
Incinerating!
Whining
Whimpering
Crying
Simpering
Shrieking
Peaking!
...Recouperating :0)
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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*Giggle*
Not only was it good, but it was amuseing too. ^_^ I like the recouperating part.

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A Compliment
Wow what a lot of participles and only one spelling mistake! Yeeha! Woo-woo! But you missed a few out.......
Sweating
Spurting
Farting
Cleaning up afterwards..
Nice poem.
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i think this a good poetic piece here which you have penned with some style, it is very enjoyable to read with my eyes, the flow is really good. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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woooooow



