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Because Of You

Because of you
The bright light suffuses on me with a golden glow.
Because of you
Sun shines bright on a heart that had no strength left.
I wish I'd found you long time ago next to my lonely pillow.
Many sweet talks left me hanging in the wind bereft.

Because of you
Sadness has vanished on the eyes that a smile couldn't disguise.
Because of you
People can see the reflection of love in my eyes.
Because of you
I’ve found courage in a love with one meaning.
Because of you
I’ve learn to be in touch with your feelings.

Because of you
My heart is saying I’ve found a faithful wife.
I have never felt this way in my life.
Since then, I've never stop thinking about you for hours.
The inside of me is decorated with your flowers.

Just on you
My dream extends through the horizon.
I’ve found this is the true love. Not a mirage.
I’m keepin’ it real as I am so excitin’.
However, I'm armed with courage.

Believe or not!
You rescued a desiccated love encased itself in a dried casket of mud,
Anticipated recovering from the rain of the unknown season.
You saved love that was washed away by someone’s flood.
Because of you, everything happened for a reason.

You've taught me to swim with the current. Not against it.
Now I’m eating the cake. A romance teller. Just because of you.
I am here for you. And you know it. Loving you sets no limit.
Remember, you are the kind of love that’s too good to be true.

Yes because of you
I am what I am now
Yes because of you
I’ve taken a vow

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  • Sandygram silver member
    November 21, 2006

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    Amazing poem

    AH This was wonderful. When cupid's arrow hits we don't stand a chance. Love does turn our minds to sweet and wonderful thoughts. I love this poem. Thank you for sharing. You take care. Sandy


  • yassmin
    November 21, 2006
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    what a sweet feeling

    love's such a sweet feeling to those who love truely,I wish I'd ever get such a sweet feeling and be loved in such a lovely way getting a rose or a cake after all love's never just a word soimple things can do miracles,I hope you enjoy your sweet feelings and hope she appreciates it as well