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Orbiting Obituary

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He was one
of
the most
humorous
Kind
Caring
Giving
Loving person to grace
Our earth.
People cannot be reduced to words,
Which this poem in no way
Proves.
Ripples from Heaven

Author notes

I saw an obituary today.  They loved him so much, I wrote them this little poem.  
Written May 9th, 2003

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  • sunshine88
    June 6, 2003
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    thats so kind and very good, in general it made me think. especially after reading your comment did you know the person? i think its hard to only be able to express with just words, like there isnt one word to describe the deepest emotions. excellent. thanks for responding to one of my poems.


  • Danna Hobart
    May 9, 2003
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    Awww... this is beautiful.
    I have lost someone recently, and I agree... words are simply not solid enough to commemorate the ones we love in their passing.