Silence gathers 'round me,
my thoughts turning deep
My mind and body tired,
having trouble getting sleep.
I feel a distance growing
don't know what to do,
all I can do is wait here
you know that I Love You.
(chorus)
I will go the Distance,
I'll be flat out till the end
I will always Love you
and I don't pretend.
You used to say I Love You,
now I hear those words no more
wheres your mind at baby?
Can I help you to explore?
The Reasons that your distant,
and that a silence grows
between us who Loved so deeply,
don't let your mind close.
To the possibility of a happy life
and forever Love with Me
So share whatever's on your mind,
then maybe you will see.
I will go the Distance,
I'll be flat out till the end
I will always Love you
and I don't pretend.
So Open your heart to me
and then you'll surely see
Our two Hearts and Kindred souls,
were always meant to be.
I will go the Distance,
I'll be flat out till the end
I will always Love you
and Baby, I don't pretend.
Author notes
The only song I have ever attempted to write. Seemed like a good place to put it... 
In a list
A contest entry
- Options!!! by CazzieJade.
300 points, ended November 26, 2006, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Fast contest Favorites only prewrites by Flash ss7.
800 points, ended July 17, 2009, 70 entries
Silver trophy winner
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it was good i liked it
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Awesome! uncle griz you should write more lyrics!
Please? for your favorite AP neice?
This was Amazing Loved it! thank you for entering my contest and good luck
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I like these lyrics, very simple concept, but really effective because of that. You used "I love you" ["love you"] which can either make or break lyrics, in my opinion. In this case you used them and it worked. I like this.
Congrats on your bronze.
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Oh wow! I love this a lot! I can almost feel the intensity of the poem. Its dept. Yes, the lines you have penned are something I can relate to sometimes.A great pleasure reading it. I see this is an entry for a contest. All the best!!!
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Aw... that's sweet. I'm a sucker for a sweet talker. Lol. It's great.
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This is so amazing, Scott....you have a talent for writing lyrics.....I wish you much luck in this contest...smiles, Terry
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