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What Secrets Lie Beneath

What secrets lie beneath?
Are they honesty or deciet?
They are bubbling underneath.
Rising up so they can breathe.

Peeling away what tries to stop
them from reaching top.
Are they good or are they not?
Coming soon so they wont rot.

They have minds of their own.
These secrets will unfold.
They shan't want to be unknown.
Although you keep them untold.

Stabbing at the surface of
your skin to get to the above.
Its is hate? Possibly love.
Soon just isn't soon enough.

Coming closer, tearing away.
They want to reveal, now, today.
It is your choice if they may stay.
Dont make them hold on another day.

Please tell me what you think

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  • karijeanne88
    November 20, 2006
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    this is on here twice...?? o well

  • karijeanne88
    November 20, 2006
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    ??

    k. i dont know why this one is on here twice:S but oh well.