I am from heaven and he is from hell.
We honestly don't fit together, not all that that well.
I am the stars, and hes as low as dirt.
No one ever told me, true love really hurts.
It hurts when he tells you, you'll always be his
It hurts when he tells you, he wants you to be the mother of his kids
He hurts you even more by saying I do
He hurts you even more, then you even know, but you do.
The pain makes you cry, makes you swim in an ocean of tears.
It never subsides, it never could possibly clear.
The pain is so harsh, you wish it weren't true.
It hurts so much, because thats what your one true love will do.
He'll take you to the moon, that and beyond,
he'll cherish you in everyway
because, true love hurts, it hurts like an itch.
The pain is overwhelming, but in due time
you'll relize the hurt is love
not something, your suddenly not blind.
The pain is amazing, you'll never forget
That first kiss... no.... it won't ever be a regret.
Author notes
True love, its Pain, Its agony, its a fucking ride, and when your ready for it, although you'll never quite be, you'll understand. Its all worth it. Trust me. Its all fucking worth it.
A contest entry
- Falling feet first... by Nicole Cudworth.
525 points, ended November 28, 2006, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A great poem indeed, written from the heart and soul. Its true love is a wild ride, and if you're not ready you better not get on.
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Love is yucky. Well the love between a man and a woman. The love between kids is fantastic...but this poem is fantastic! You write eloquently!
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Hm... well i'm rather lost on if you mean that love literally hurts and the guy intentionally hurts you, or if the hurt just happens and if it's good or bad. Do you like love or not?? Well I haven't been hurt by true love, and hopefully I won't, but if I'm going to, I'm glad you've informed me. Good advice I suppose although i don't quite get it. lol
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Well then you oviously have no sense of reading between the lines, and I honestly don't feel the need to explain the poem to you...LOL (only put there to not make me seem like a bitch) Deja Vu eh?
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This says so much... you are right. When you love someone that much it does hurt but it is an amazing ride. I appreciate your entry into my contest and loved the content. It's always great to see a different view from the regular cliched view of love. Refreshing indeed.
Love and luck in all you endeavor.
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oh my word, i love this peice alot, i think at some or other point we all go through this, currently i am going through a simelar situation. sounds like the words were stolen right from my mouth! well don
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haha, well thanks. I knew people had to relate to this, its the kind of love, people don't want to talk about, the hush hush part I guess, but we all go through it, and its amazing.
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