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Pain

Power,
from looking at her eyes.
Despair,
at the next second.
Knowing,
that I can never get to her.....
know her.....
Words,
enchanting,bespelling,taking me over,
as pain,
at my disposal,
brings me loss,
as the beauty just collapses,
as mirror on stone breaks,
as I take into the matter of love.....

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  • Be.Your.Own.Hero
    September 3, 2008

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    Wow! This was amazing! I loved it so much! The power and emotion packed into this was very strong, and very heartfelt. You delivered a very touching poem and I'm glad I had the opportunity to read it. Keep up the great work Mittens ^^

    ~*Princess*~


  • Tortured Poet
    July 22, 2008
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    woa, this is pretty. and sweet. I like it


  • Aiyoris Maryian
    January 13, 2008
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    Pain = Love...That is the gist of my existence (Aiyoris's and my own). Beautifully penned, my lord.


  • kayia
    January 2, 2008
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    WOW

    That is very interesting i like it


  • FlyingXDaggers
    June 16, 2007

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    hmmm, this poem is about love yet the title is pain. i guess you are right about that, love in every way is pain the poem was powerful, and the occasional pauses made thier point, great write!

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