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Black Line

I wished I'd never'd lived alone,
shining light bright,right in my eyes.
I turned so far,
then went away,
into solitude,
into servitude,
in all my days.....
I wished I'd never'd liv'd,
Rather than to be the person I am now,
I'd rather die than hold my head high,
'cause I've nothing left in me...
I've never lived,
I've nevr died,
frozen someplace,somewhere,
from time to time.
I am one,
I am alone.
with no one's help,
I stand alone,
alone.....

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  • ChemicalArtemis
    October 25, 2007
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    I love this.... I am finally reading way too many poems for my own good! LOL!