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Fierce

New to this place,
I can't find myself just quite yet
Don't move too fast for me,
Remember I'm unique
And I can't believe every word that you utter.

I want to describe me to you,
But the challenge is beyond anyone to see
So don't try to get me
Don't try to understand me
I'm probably going to leave soon
There is no point to go on.

Suddenly days go by,
Words seem to fly
In and through me
I understand this more clearly.

Time is to dear for us
No wounds created
No lusts upgraded
I thank you for your participation,
Now let's figure this one out
Remeber I'm new to this place
And I can't find myself just quite yet.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Lady Eventide
    November 24, 2006

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    Deep

    You may still be working on this...but it's deep so far. Very. Only problem I see: you spelled "to" wrong in the third line. It's supposed to be too. No worries. I like it so far. Keep me posted, sis.