I am only human and i follow my creed
I am only human I shall live as I believe
I am only human there ae times I am weak and times when I am strong
I am only human let me sing my own life's song
I am only human as I want to sit and smile
I am only human leave me cry a while
I am only human where should I begin
I am only human and this I will pass to my kin
WE are only human can you not see?
WE ARE ONLY HUMAN ...so let us be free
Please tell me what you think
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Too much repetition of the whole "I am only human", to be quite honest I get it. Also no offense,but do you ever use spell check? hahaha! Third line: "there 'ae' times I am weak"----I believe you meant 'are'. I know its silly, but spelling sometimes drives me crazy. Don't worry, not judging you.
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good work
it's true that we are all only human and each line rings truth to what we all owe each other friends and family alike...excellent write! -
I liked it a lot. Especially this line: "I am only human I shall live as I believe". That was awesome.
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Awwwwww, sweet. I really like it. It lets me know that everyone makes mistakes....but we are all the same.
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Love this one, everything that is written here is true. Really makes me think!
Great work
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oh wow. i can really connect to this. brilliant. thanx. it brightened my day i was moaning abt not being as perfect as some other ppl... becuz im very clumsy and stuff.... nice!
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good job! keep up the good work!
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OMG!!!!
it is so simple yet so refined.... i find it to be a very liberating poem... it makes me feel better because now i know im not the only one who feels like people are allowed to make mistakes, we are not god there-fore we are not perfect.... i find it beautiful...
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You have woven this piece with beauty and FACT. More a shout for our rights. I think the questions made this poem more alive and since your “I” changed into “We” at the end, the readers could feel more involve into your lines.
“I am only human” hey we can be more than just a human! We can be of God. We should have higher purposes to live with.
Thanks for sharing this nice rhyming poem with us :-)
~Massy~
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great
This hit me deep i can really relate to it
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wow
i love this it is insanely good! i love how you change to descibing humans as a whole and the last line nicely sums it all up! stunning! i LOVE it!
xX HauntedByDesire Xx
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Wow! I loved this piece. It is sooo true.
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yay is up here lol i still feel special....my friend tam loved it to
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Wow, one poem, and i think you're awesome
cause this poem's too true, and it's cool how you go from describing yourself, to a population as a whole ^^
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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Fantastic
wow I think out of the poems I have read of yours this is the best one. it speaks the truth
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wow
i am in shock and awwwwww...wwwww lol. my favorite is i am only human leave my cry a while. my fav line. wonderful. yet another. this is so like me. i love this poem to death
jess
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