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squeeze your neck



my face is blank,
love balances anger.

you're here, and you probably shouldn't be.
you realize I'm losing control of myself.

I want to push you into my matress.
I want you to feel smoothered.

I want to squeeze your neck so tight.
no passage left for lies to escape.

It's danger you deserve,
and you seem to enjoy it.

but what will I do,
when squeezing your neck,
isn't enough?

Author notes

it's a poem about a robin's egg nested in hatred's needles.

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  • Lo Justin
    January 14, 2007
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    Masturbatory. Sounds like the kind of pain you enjoy.


  • Asylaarix
    November 27, 2006
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    The title of this poem matched the poem itself!!! that is really awesome!!! you did a very good job expressing your feelings in this one ... But what will I do, when squeezing your neck, isn't enough? very good ending ... you did a fabulous job on this ... good write and good luck in the contest

  • a u r a
    November 20, 2006

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    'but what can I do,
    when squeezing your neck,
    isn't enough? '- this josef sounds real powerful- does she really deserve a more stirnner reaction? is she really that worthwhile?- are you giving it more importance than it really should deserve- if yes- then Josef wringing sqeezing her neck is not what you should be doing -on the contratry just the opposite- that would mean she really really means the world to you- so go win her back thats the only way- after all we have only one life- as for the,'lies'- we all deserve another chance- I am rambling again as usual- this poem has emoted so well that I feel thoroughly involved- now thats great writing indeed !