I'm bruised,
Inside and out,
From someone,
Who is supposed to love me,
And care about me,
But a few drinks in your system,
And you lash out at me,
Pounding your fist,
Into my stomach,
Pulling me,
Down the hall,
Pushing me,
Into the wall,
Grabbing me,
And not letting go.
Author notes
Self explanitory, written when i was about 13,14
Please tell me what you think
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Very graphic - visual lines you have penned here. People change when they drink too much, and some become violent and nasty. Sorry you were at the end of such a man. Those memories are not nice ones that you carry along with you. Thanks for commenting on LOving a Drunk - glad you read it. Have a good day!
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wow...its really true....alchohol changes a person...and personally i don't like it....not in the very least...i believe parents shouldn't drink to the point where they hurt the ones they care about...i really liked your poem...thnxs for the comment on mine...peace
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