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Gone

Our time is gone, my heart is done

My eyes are sore, crying is not fun

My heart aches, my throat is sore

My hands long to touch you, just once more

My wish for me, did not come true

I wish you liked me, the way i liked you

Now you are gone, and I am blue

My eyes are deprived of seeing you

We were never lovers, we were barely friends

I shake your hand goodbye, and thats how it ends.

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  • dark sad gal
    June 1, 2007
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    WOW

    omg thats soo good .. im not quite sure what it means but its really good hey!!

    happy writing xx