Red,gold colored leaves
Blown from trees,cavort in breeze
Fall slowly to earth.
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Written May 8th, 2003
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A contest entry
- Autumn Vibrance by city light illusion.
458 points, ended October 22, 2005, 14 entries
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a beautful haiku- i myself have never quite been concise enough to say all that is need to be said in three lines; you accomplish this with grandeur. your choice of words is excellent, my commendations.
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This is awesome . . . I wish that I had even half the talent that you show in this writing style!
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Pol -
Autumn is my 2nd favorite season because of all the beautiful colors!
Nice one Bill....Fall has it's own scents that just make me feel so calm and peaceful! If only we could go from Fall to Spring and into summer, just skip winter and snow all together!!! LOL
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