I hear your voice, calling me
Haunting my every moment
Hate me if you want, this wasn't my choice
None of this was meant to be
I didn't want this life of yours
You forced me to live it
And now, now you can't take it back
This is my life to live
Stop staring at me in the mirror
Stop mocking my every move
Stop changing my face to become yours
Just leave me alone
I didn't want this life of yours
You forced me to live it
And now, now you can't take it back
This is my life to live
I've changed everything about this body
Made it fit me and my soul
So go away, leave me be
I don't want to see your face in the mirror
I didn't want this life of yours
But now it belongs to me
Stop whispering your name in my ears
You gave this life away
Author notes
I know it's repetitive. It helps the poem idea along.
Anything.
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Great!
Actually, I don't think it's fair. You're better at writing poetry than me. But you're good!!
~The annoying person who has been trapped in Maine until recently
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Aww, am not. But thanks much, Katie-chan-who-is-not-a-pyro! XD
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Well done! Love the feel and emotion in this piece!
Welcome to AP; hope you enjoy the site and hope to see; more of your poetry
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The repetition works very well, it gives more strength to the poem and links all the stanzas together so you don't forget what it's about. I liked it, great write!
~Angel~
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Good
Reiyn~
Hey! I thought that this was a really good write. The repeatative didnt bother me...I tend to do that too...sometimes I think that it helps. Well keep on writing, and I hope to see some more soon.
~!~Manda~!~
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