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A Tribute

A Priceless gift always in my grasp,
I was blinded to how wonderful you are.
A faithful genius, one of a kind,
I can't believe you chose me.

 

I am having a hard time believing

I deserve you, probably because I don't.

Your love towards me is beyond this world,

I can't believe you chose me.

 

You put up with every inconcievable,

irrational, delusional notion about you.

God gave you strength beyond human-

always in control, always steering my

outrageous misconceptions towards truth,

never losing patience, never ceasing

to be kind, never wavering, always

simply knowing.  I never thought you understood,

and yet you understood me, and us

more than anyone else possibly could

twenty years prove that.

I can't believe, you chose me

 

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  • HpWICKEDangel
    November 23, 2006
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    all doubts of your loved one. nice work.


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    November 23, 2006
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    awesomely done

    this is wonderful. congratulations on twenty years and on the great poem you have written. thank you for sharing this with me. it gives hope to me that love can be real. happy thanksgiving. viyanna rosemarie

  • silent symphony
    November 23, 2006

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    awesome!

    woww...
    thats beautiful..
    i cudnt help but smile as i read every line,
    it felt as though it was a reflection of MY LIFE!!!
    very wellwritten, thru the economical use of words but nowhere have the emotions been sacrificed..
    very VERY nicely put...
    great stuff!
    keep up the good work.

  • optional
    November 23, 2006

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    great wonderfull work

    appreciation of one's love and devoshtion is over looked at most time's in busy lifes is much needed saying thanks alot means so much to the one you love


  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    November 23, 2006

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    Excellant/romantic

    Very well written. I don't have any favorite or least favorite parts. Nor did I notice any awkwardness. I don't like using line numbers. This brought back warm and fuzzy memories.

  • bebacksoon
    November 23, 2006

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    this is a great tribute to love but I think you are selling yourself short. You deserve all the love you get and nothing less


  • individuality gold member
    November 23, 2006
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    inconcievable, - when using ie after c - we were taught a rhyme in junior school - i before e except after c other than that one point, a good poem here on love and smiles. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...


  • Trellis
    November 23, 2006
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    Beautiful!

    Very appropriate for Thanksgiving Day, and so well written. An exquisite tribute to the angel in your life. Blessings to you both.

    Cris


  • TheFlawedOne
    November 20, 2006
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    Awww

    I can't understand why you would think that you don't deserve to be loved and have love. I really liked this poem. It was happy and sad at the same time.
    Have a dreamy day
    ~*Blushful Lie*~


  • panegyric ink
    November 19, 2006
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    nice write.


  • Not-The-Sun silver member
    November 19, 2006

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    this is a very lovely write!!! you definitely captured my attention from the beginning. i expected it to be a rhyme scheme but i certainly enjoyed reading something right from the heart! great write, keep up the great work as well. <3 *Jordan


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    November 19, 2006

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    Perfection.

    the devotion and sincerity shown to you by your loved one shines through perfectly in this piece. all those slight imperfections and wayward ways, comforted or resolved with the touch and dexterity of love so pure. this is a great way of portreying what you feel, well done, great write. and thank you for gracing these pages with such work.

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