seeing in the distance
your glow
brighter than any
lighting the world
creating a northern star
leading us on our way
i feel your touch
from miles and miles away
keeping me warm
holding me
releasing my fears
of this temporary world
i taste your blood inside me
flowing from vein to vein
keeping me going
helping me get through these days
two as one
You and i
i smell your distinct smell
the smell of forever
of greatness
of power greater than any
taking me over
a greater thing
i hear your whisper
telling me the right path
through the walls
giving me instructions
leading other to you
in every way
we are one
You and i
Author notes
My first real poem in a long time. [D]
A contest entry
- Yet another Options Contest by Ravenblood.
450 points, ended December 3, 2006, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Really sweet, great job ;]
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this is really cool..very sweet and simple..i love the last 3 lines..they are so powerful and express ur poem very well..
great work here
good luck
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Nice poem. thanks for entering and good luck in here.
Claire -
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there.
forgot to add the letter.
its choice D.
i added it now.
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