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The Red Balloon

Running down the road
Chasing my red balloon
Slipped out of my fingers it did
Hop and skip and jump
I catch the string again
"You can't get away from me!" I cry

The string slips again
Laughing and giggling
The chase continues
Barely getting hold
Before the string slips again

Higher it flies
Higher I jump
Finally get the string
Then the string falls off

The red balloon gets away
"I'll get you another day"
Yet it was never meant to be

Author notes

Wanted something that seemed happy and fun but had a tinge of less good things...

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  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    November 28, 2006

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    wooooow it's been a long time since ya posted anything. I almost missed this one. it was an interesting write for sure, keep up the great work.


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    November 18, 2006
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    Oh God, this is so fucking sad! I hate things like that...it seems so cruel and horrible...*whimpers*