There once was girl
She felt so alone
In a crowded room
She was still on her own
Not all friends cared
That she wanted it to end
So all her smiles
Became dreams of pretend
Silent screams
Came from her heart
Cause the one she loved
Made her fall apart
She had all these nightmares
But nobody understood
They told her to forget
But she knew she never would
She lived in her day dreams
In her own little world
But no one believed in
That naive girl
She tried to hide her tears
When she was at school
But when she came home
She felt like a fool
She tried to stop the tears
When she woke up screaming at night
So she laid in her bed
And hugged her teddy tight
All she needed was a friend
Someone who would care
So she let the tears fall
And everyone would stare
Innocent in so many ways
Shy in her silent dreams
Scared to wake up every morning
And put up with her screams
Now she hides in her room
From her life and all it's contents
Waiting for a time that they'll hear
Her silent tears of innocence
Please tell me what you think
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sad sad poem. I like it though. Your poetry is very powerful. I was rereading some of the others that I've read and you have grown a lot since what I have read before. You amaze me.
Dani -
aww its so sad!! but its one of my new faves. i always loves your poems tho. dont stop writing =]
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This one is great, also! I love the way it makes one feel. It kind of....puts you in that position, and you experience the pain for yourself.
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great
i would say stuff but u might cry so ill just say i dont want you to die i love you so dont cry this was an amazing poem (lol i still cant spell so i might have not speeled it right) it was great i loved it but it was not mine to love ill ttyl i guess bye love Corey Smith
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im here for you
hey tiff im always here and you know iunderstand you and is the guy you are talking bout cody?
just wondering but this poem is very good and i would applaoud but i dont have any points
your sis,
Jessica -
Amazing...
This is a beautiful poem. I want to make sure you know that I care about you and that I'm here....Love you Tifnie!!!
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Beautifully Sad.
"They told her to forget
But she knew she never would"
Those are my favorite lines. In the last sentence, I must say good sounding out, but it's spelled innocence. I loved this darling, glad to see it's not under personal though. It reminds me in a way of the little girl version of me. I loved this and I hope everything is okay. I'm here to talk if you need me.
XoXo,
Sara.
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