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  I would trade a lifetime

For just a fleeting moment,

I would climb the highest mountain,

And walk the tallest rope bridge,

Exchange a thousand smiles,

For a lifetime of tears,

To be with

You.

 

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  • HammeR
    October 7, 2008

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    Diamonds are forever

    First off kudos to you for getting the shape of this write to express what you wanted to with the words.

    Perhaps I am cynical but I wonder if You being a singular actually is worthy of providing that much endurance, In other words I think it should be mutual.

    The sentiment you have conveyed in this write is a very profound one, worthy of great praise, a devotion that few grasp.
    Great write and thank you for sharing.


  • Slowly searching
    November 19, 2006

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    awesome

    aww this is soo sweet! I know how you feel!! There is someone i'd do anythign for! I really would to! But I like how short this is also. It means alot for something so smal hehe but then again so do many things good job