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Lost Angel

Missing image
She is lost and not know the way
Angel of lost
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Angel of lost
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She is always confused
And her world is falling down
No one to guide her
And no one could save her
Sadness falls her eyes
Blurring her vision
As she remember all the sadness years
She sit there depressed
Her life is so much of struggle without peace
Her journey is either short or long
But never meant to stay forever
Can anyone of you can make her smile?







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  • Amera gold member
    July 3, 2007

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    I like this, it’s a different approach and very original. This is so sad but well put. Your flow is smooth and easy to read.. Best of luck in the contest and thank you for entering.

    Love,
    Amera ♥