I am a young man,
as old now as I'll ever get,
I lie upon cold ground
trying to forget,
visions of those gone before me,
of whose life I brought to sudden demise,
those who lie before me,
to move not again,
no pain,
only sorrow,
to reach such an end,
another life wasted,
in this troubled land.
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Hmmmm. A little different from some of the other entries I've seen for this contest yet still good.
Thanks for entering. Good luck.
Brian -
This is a really good poem and I thank you for entering it into my contest. Some poetry is best small yet its not so simple. It really says alot about that person ina few short words and it flows so well. Good Luck and thank you for entering into my contest.
-TransparentHeart -
I love the imagary of the first three lines.
Dunno what else to say, it's a very nice piece
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