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The Gift

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The old man was sitting on his front porch swing
When a cute, little girl on the sidewalk said hi.
She reminded him of his own child, years ago,
So much so it brought a happy tear to his eye.

He had seen the girl before and knew who she was.
She lived in the house where the yelling came from.
He tried not to judge but he had always worked hard
And from what he'd seen, he knew her dad was a bum.

He said, "Hello there, sweetness! What's your name?"
"My name is Cindy," she answered with a shy smile.
The old man said, "I've got something for you, Cindy.
Don't go away.  I'm old and it may take me a while."

The old man went into a bedroom, carefully preserved.
It had belonged to his own daughter way back when.
On the bed, there was a ragdoll in a colorful dress.
It was her constant companion and very best friend.

But the world was too hard for his little girl to live in.
She got lost after leaving the peace and safety of home.
In a haze of drugs, her troubled life ended too early,
Leaving her father and mother to face life all alone.

They were both crushed, but her mother never recovered
And she died soon afterward, perhaps hoping to find her,
But not as the sad, tortured soul that she had become,
As the innocent child dragging the ragdoll behind her.

The old man had been alone for many, many lonesome years.
He said to the doll, "It's time that you were loved again.
Dolls like you were made for girls like Cindy to cuddle
And you've been in this dusty room too long, old friend."

So he picked up the doll and walked back downstairs.
Cindy was drawing a rainbow on the sidewalk in chalk.
Kneeling, the old man said, "I have something for you.
You can take her with you next time you go for a walk."

He handed her the doll and her sad eyes opened wide.
She took it with both hands and held it up to her face.
Then she looked at it again and stroked its yarn hair,
Mesmerized by the colors and intricacy of the lace.

The old man was wise indeed to give the old doll to Cindy
For she was rarely given presents and she needed a friend.
She thanked him and he said, "You're welcome, sweetheart."
Then she threw her arms around him and thanked him again.

It was then that her father finally noticed she was missing.
He crashed through the front door and yelled out her name.
He saw her down the street being hugged by the old man.
His own mind was ugly, so everything else was the same.

He yelled, "Get your hands off her, you dirty, old man!"
As he stormed down the sidewalk with hate in his eyes.
It didn't matter to him that he was fifty years younger
Or that the old man was only about half of his size.

The only thing perverted was his own imagination.
He was a product of this graceless, corrupted age.
He was also infected with the disease of "machismo"
So the only emotion available to him was blind rage.

Again, he yelled, "Get away from her, you son of a bitch!"
The old man and Cindy looked over, scared and confused.
"Yeah, you!" he screamed, "Get your hands off my daughter!"
The old man still wasn't sure of what he was being accused.

He yanked her away, wrenching her delicate arm.
"But, daddy!" she pleaded, "He only gave me a doll!"
She too couldn't understand why he was so angry.
Then he hit the old man and she watched him fall.

"That'll teach you, you old pervert!" he bellowed,
Then he stormed off for home, hoping nobody saw.
He dragged Cindy along and she dragged her doll
But his only true concern was avoiding the law.

At home, Cindy ran straight to the side window
And saw the old man lying still on the ground.
Then two police cars and an ambulance arrived
And some of the neighbors gathered around.

She cried, hoping to see her friend stand up again.
Her father yelled "Quiet!", but with fear in his eyes.
A few minutes later, there was a knock at the door.
The police took him away amid her mother's cries.

She looked over again and smiled through her tears
As she saw her friend talking to the ambulance men.
He smiled when he saw her sweet face at the window,
More worried about the wounds she'd have to mend.

The police came back to the house a few hours later
To investigate marks they'd noticed on Cindy's skin.
She was taken away and sent to a new, loving home
Where life could be all it was supposed to have been.

Her new parents bought her all that they could afford.
Cindy never wanted for anything again, nothing at all,
But no matter how glorious her new playthings were,
She would never let go of that old, tattered ragdoll.

The old man slowly became a distant, faded memory
And his kind act, a graceful moment in troubled years,
But neither of them knew that one act of generosity
Would put an end to all of her troubles and fears.

When she was old enough to drive, she returned again
To the street where she had cried for so long in vain.
Her parents' house was as ugly as her memories were
But forgiveness was still buried beneath her pain.

So she drove past it and stopped at the old man's house.
It was just as warm and welcoming as it was years before.
She said to the old ragdoll, "We have someone to visit",
Then walked through the garden and knocked on the door.

It had been ten years, so he was a little bit grayer
But his smile was still warm and his eyes still kind.
She said, "Remember me? It's been a very long time",
Holding the doll behind her to play with his mind.

He said, "I'm sorry. I lost my glasses a few days ago
And my eyesight is going. I'm ninety-three, after all."
She said, "Oh, please forgive me. I'll give you a clue."
Then she gently placed in his hands the old ragdoll.

He held the doll, not quite sure what was happening,
Then a broad smile spread across his grand, old face.
"Cindy! Oh, my goodness! How on earth have you been?
Come in and bring some life to this dusty, old place!"

They talked all day and all evening about all sorts of things.
She thanked him again and said he was her first, best friend.
When she left, the old man, the girl and the ragdoll embraced
And from then on, the three of them were never alone again.


"No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted."

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  • AusStar gold member
    June 14

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    Oh Mark, I can't believe you wrote this.

    This is quite possibly the best thing i have ever read


  • She Has My Heart
    May 25, 2007
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    I love this, it's a great story and as always comes with a message. The little details like

    Cindy was drawing a rainbow on the sidewalk in chalk

    set you and your writing apart from almost anything else I have read. Keep it up and I'll keep reading x take care x


  • paullallady silver member
    April 27, 2007

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    What a wonderful storyteller you are. This was a most amazing write. It has depth, and caring, and the good and the bad, and most important of all, a happy ending. terrific.
  • moonstar
    April 18, 2007

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    Mark! Geez, you made me well up with tears and everything!! What a heart you've got in you.
    No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted, and we never know the impact we could've had on the life that we pretended not to see.
    You rock.


  • TillyMay
    April 7, 2007

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    Beautifully Done

    I hate to admit it, but I was so pleased it had a happy ending. I know, I know...but there are two things that tug at my heart more than anything else. Those two things are: The suffering of children, and the suffering of the elderly. Physical, emotional, spiritual, I can't bear it. I don't know how people shut their eyes, doors and hearts to it these days, but so many do. I hope this does make people think- risk that bloody nose to help that child. Risk having someone angry with you to save a battered woman- don't fall into the wicked trap of "I don't want to get involved". I got news for you, mate...if you've seen it, you're involved. I would hope that if my daughter were being hurt, that someone...ANYONE would step forward and DO something- SAY something- I loved this Mark- because people must care...we MUST reach out and care about one another. If we don't- we are all ruined.

    • Tilly,

      I was just going over some old responses on this poem and wanted to say thanks for yours. Your comments made writing the poem worthwhile, and of course, I agree completely with your feelings about children and the elderly. I've always been an intervener when I see something wrong going on, much to my wife's dismay, but you said it perfectly - "If you've seen it, you're involved." Thanks again. I hope you're doing well.

      Mark

      • TillyMay
        June 21
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        Cheers for the kind words, Mark. I recently got myself into a bit of trouble (and nearly a smack down) when I intervened in a public family squabble where an elderly woman was pushed and nearly fell. My partner, (a police officer) is worse than I am when it comes to intervening and the words "off duty" have no meaning.
        Your wife may appear "dismayed" but you've got to know that underneath the discomfort of the situation- I am confident she is incredibly proud of you. I am so pleased to know there are people out there who will stand up, without shame and say "Enough."
        Cheers for your courage and compassion.

  • ferg silver member
    April 2, 2007
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    Thought provoking and riveting read. Good job Mark!


  • SuZyCuE
    March 26, 2007

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    What a sad yet beautiful poem. It rings of the horrors of abuse that some children must endure, but there is a hint of hope, as she finds her friend that even after the 10 years has gone by is still in her thoughts. Beautiful simply beautiful


  • SharonLynn
    March 25, 2007

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    This is beautiful, it almost made me cry, which doesn't happen very often anymore. You have always been able to amaze me with your words. As deeply as I can relate with this poem is almost scary...I really am pretty much unable to think of a comment that would be befitting of the power of this poem so I'm just going to leave my comment at this.
    Sharon

  • Nature Song silver member
    March 25, 2007
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    aso heart reaching this poem is. Sad to think life can be cruel. In the end we learn life's lessons the hard way. But there is always someone willing to touch our hearts. Thank you for sharing this poem. Brings back a nightmare or too, but I know I'm in a safe place now. ~Sie


  • Debbysmiles gold member
    March 25, 2007

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    This is so beautiful and truly touched my heart. I loved the story and that good won over bad in this crazy world. Awesome writing.. read like a dream. Blessings. Debby


  • Cannonsfire silver member
    March 25, 2007

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    This is one of the best story pieces I have ever read, the description and the storyline so full of touching and heartfelt senitments amid the rage and sadness of a little girls life. So sad society that cannot see a random act of kindness for what it is. I applaud you for the entire thing which I think is perfect. Love, C


  • Romily
    March 25, 2007
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    very very very very much witty one!
  • Yvette Champ
    March 25, 2007

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    Dearest Mark,I was so delighted to see your name in the feature box ( long time no hear or see ) that I clicked & then I recalled reading and commenting on this before,I adore your ability to imbue a lesson within your creativity,with philosophy that doesn't preach but reaches,am going to return the points for the cost of this critique so that you may get another opinion as now you have mine,inadvertently,twice!!As ever,in conclusion,re-mark-able,many blessings,Yvette
  • hazydreams
    March 25, 2007

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    Beautiful

    Very well written. Love the story and it is true that no act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted. Very good write.


  • waydownuponjoy
    March 25, 2007
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    I don't know why this was hidden in the "Erotica" section!

    I can not believe that this poem is not out in the general public section and should indeed ... be spread far and wide. This is one beautiful poem and mirrors such a truth about "who's the fool?" I love it and will be promoting it too! joy


    • Mark Rickerby gold member
      March 28, 2007
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      waydownuponjoy,

      Thanks so much for reading and promoting my poem The Gift. I appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed it.

      Take care,

      Mark

  • MysticAngelEyes
    March 23, 2007

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    Wow what a nice story you've written, syou really showed your emotions and feelings. Very nicely written.

  • Saxychick86
    March 20, 2007

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    I loved the way you wrote this. The story was one that is all too familiar in this world. Thank you for sharing this.

  • klassy lassy
    March 20, 2007

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    Mark, You have such a wonderful flair for story telling and making your point. It is so easy to be kind...and the machismo of hatred is far too prevalent, so I am touched beyond words and grateful that you have the same spirit as the old man in your story (which, by the way, is beautiful.) I suspect that child's father would not have crossed you. ~ Karen


  • Livin in the moment
    March 19, 2007

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    Oh my gah! This is beautiful! I cried...seriously! A poem that can bring out emotion in people like that is truly a great poem. Congrats! Keep it up!


  • Marissa Ann Scott
    March 19, 2007
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    Wow

    Mark, this is a glorious poem. And it is true. Kindness is never forgotten. I've encountered too many people like her father. And not enough men like the old man. Wonderful write. I enjoyed it a lot to say the least.


  • Whisper Mckee
    March 18, 2007
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    WOW

    You brought a smile and a tear with this one. You write well and tell a good story.


  • dreamdragon6484
    March 18, 2007
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    Wow Awsome Write

    This is a wonderful writre. It is a sad world we live in today, but love and kindness has survived and will always survive. As long as there are people like the older gentelman still care. God Bless and keep the words and ink flowing.


  • janejainejayne gold member
    March 18, 2007
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    Lovely

    This is a wonderful story and reminds us that acts of kindness are just that and they are never forgotton.
    It is a strange world now and we must remember that as well. You are a good story writer! Jane


  • Stonecosta
    March 18, 2007
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    Wow... great story, well told. It's interesting that it was written as a poem rather than a short story. Everything about it is poetic in nature, and you really max out it's potential by telling it beautifully. Good job!


  • cherche -d -ame gold member
    March 18, 2007

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    Oh Mark , it has been ages since I have stopped to read anything by you, and I am glad to see that your heart is still where it has always been. I must admit though that this stirred up a mixture of feelings, as well as questioning within myself....should I see a little girl being hugged by a strange older man. How sad that society has come to this. I do know that my initial reaction would be one of mistrust and worry as to what he was up to. I am glad to see that the twist you put on this that justice was served in the way that the real culprit [her father] was brought to justice.......how great a world it would be if that would always be the case [ the well intentioned not be judged and the guilty exposed]. Thank you for giving this such a happy ending,
    z
    reenie


  • queenie
    March 15, 2007
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    this was so well worth the read. i just never wanted it to end.there are so many emotions in this. this kind act had its own rewards and although so don't, there is no reason not to extend them to others.thanks for sharing this.


  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    March 12, 2007

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    Thanks, Kevin. Glad you liked it. I'll think about that "my darling" line. Good point. Nice to hear from you.

    Mark

  • Kevin Moderators member
    March 10, 2007

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    It's funny, because I was worried at the start that he would be a lecherous evil old man too. Our society is so suspicious of men and girls!

    Fun story, though I thought the inclusion of "my darling" was a bit early since they hadn't really known each other that much.

    Excellent verse form. I always dislike center-spacing, but your even line length (wow!) kept it easy to read.

    Great work!


  • heismysong silver member
    February 2, 2007
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    Long time, no see!

    Don't know that I've read this one- I like it!

    When life gets hard, we all need a soul out there to care.

    Wonderful poem.

  • Mr C
    January 9, 2007

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    What a beautiful write. Such a telling tale of twisted morals in society today. I am choked up with emotion.


  • BeautifulButterfly
    January 3, 2007
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    that is wonderful

    thank you for featuring it. it must have taken FOREVER to write and shows the passion that you must hold your writing in. I do not have any points left today but I shall be back when I do to applaud. This is heart-felt and wonderful.

  • Sahlili20
    January 3, 2007
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    Wonderful

    I loved this. It makes me think about all of those who are not as fortunate as me. It makes me think of all of the children out there who have been abused or treated wrong. Thank you for this poem, it is awesome! Sahlili20


  • Deviantpoetess
    December 7, 2006
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    excellent

    This was a tearjerking yet hopeful write.I honestly clicked on my favorites as I havent been on for awhile,like yourself I have changed my name too at AP but one thing goes to show that although names change good writes dont..thank you for sharing such a unique write..Keep up the excellent work
    Lori~

  • jolenebaxter96021
    December 6, 2006
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    beautiful in sentiment

    this poem made me cry, simple but beautiful, you have a gift for evoking empathy

  • Whispering Winds
    November 29, 2006

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    Its been too long since I have read you, And I picked the perfect write to read. This makes me sit back and think of all the little ones that are abused each day. Being an abused child is very hard to deal with. People dont realize you dont have to hit a child to abuse them. I wont get started too deep on this or you will be reading till tomorrow. Thank you for telling this story. There are so many people out there that really need to read this.

    Much love always,
    Tammy

  • Yvette Champ
    November 18, 2006

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    Beauty Personified

    Dearest re-mark-able poet,I have warm,salty tears racing down my face,in a lazy race for freedom.You are a writer that proves that it is quality of output that counts that not quantity.Whether I read a piece by you a week or a month apart I am moved.At the beginning of the piece it was obviously written to rhyme and I tried to pay attention so that I may comment as to whether it flowed,but became captivated by the contents to the extent was not concentrating on anything else but the imagery and emotions,the duality of the plight of one loving man rendered childless by bereavement and one girl living a bereavement of her parentage.
    A well written piece,with the two ends of the spectrum of human nature laid bare indeed showing that even a small act of kindness may not be forgotton by those that are the most in need of an act of kindness.
    This also brought to my mind my dearest Grandad,a wonderful man who always had a quarter of sweets in his pocket and if he should pass children during his evening "constitutional" and be partaking of a sweet he would share them.I shall never forget the sadness in his eyes when he told me that he no longer ate a sweet on his daily walk lest a child asked for one as society was different now with all the need to make kids aware of stranger danger he daren't offer a sweet even if asked for fear of a wrong association and it saddened him,all the kids in the neighbourhood loved my Grandad,all the birds loved him and would meet at his windowsill and chirp for crusts,all the ladies in the sheltered accommadation loved my Grandad for his character,he was one helluva a guy for all the right reasons just as the character within this story.
    Many definitions of beauty exist,some may be seen within a picture,heard within music but true beauty ,as the late great Helen Keller said,is neither seen nor heard but felt and that is why this write is beauty personified,it enables the reader to feel the beauty outweighing the dark,well done,would encourage you to keep spilling ink into motivational philosophy that is as soothing to the soul as is a warm panacea.
    Love and light,Yvette


    • Mark Rickerby gold member
      November 22, 2006
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      Dear Yvette,

      It sounds like your grandfather was a wonderful man, and exactly the kind of person I was thinking of when I wrote this, bless his soul. It's a sad world when adults can't hug or offer candy to children without people thinking they're up to something.

      Thanks for your thoughts on this. It's always great to hear from you.

      Happy Thanksgiving!

      Mark

  • Invisible Comfort
    November 18, 2006

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    You always know just how to tug on heart strings
    An excellent write, once again, with a great message. Keep 'em coming
    xx

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