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Take Me there

It’s a long dark night much like any before
Again I freeze down deep to my core,
And begin to wish more and more…

Sometimes I wake up crying at night...
Wishing some one would take me from here
Take me to a place with out any fear.
Where love grows strong and hate is so wrong
Where freedom takes control of the soul and lets us be who we want to be
A doctor, a lawyer, a preacher a judge it’s all the same to me…
Take me to a place where I can love, live,
And lay in the sun with out hearing the sound of a far off gun.

Won’t you take me?

To a place that I can feed my soul with friends and care,
Where I can learn that food will always be there.
Where I can fill my mind with knowledge of space, time and Air.

Is there such a place?

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 22, 2006
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    BEst of luck in the contest. Happy holidays.


  • Cr187
    November 18, 2006
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    Interesting poem, very powerful at some parts, but a little weaker at other areas. Good luck in the contest!