How do I get through the fact that your not here?
How do I hold on to someone that’s not there?
How do I get so happy to hear the sound of your voice?
Being without you, how is that a choice?
How do I move on, knowing that we will never be able to hold eachother?
Knowing distance is a bitch, and never again will we be together.
How can I continue, knowing that no one can amount to you,
knowing your one in a million and our feelings been so true?
How can you go leaving me behind?
How can I understand your reason over time?
How does days turn into months and months into years?
How does a year go by and I still don’t have you near,
and every single minute, you tell me you shed tears?
How will I ever get through the fact that you were mine,
and to see you again is worth every dime,
and every dime is worth every second with you,
...but not even
because my love for you is priceless.
How did I , how did you move on despite this?
How do I, how can I, how does, how will I, how do I
find the strength to get through all of this without ever asking why?
How do I live without you knowing I refuse to keep my emotions inside?
There’s so much more I want you to know,
there’s so much more I want to say,
but just know for now, without you
I will survive another day.
-Ivona Patrick
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iN tHIS vERSION i wROTE, tHE lAST lINE iS tHE sTRONGER (mENTALLY) oF tHE tWO.
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let me start by saying this is great. You put so much longing, love and pain into it. Thats what makes me like it alot.
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an interesting structure to this poem, but well thought out and put together ideas. i agree that the last line is strong, but my favourite lines have to be:
because my love for you is priceless.
How did I , how did you move on despite this?
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Thank you for your feedback.
coolchick
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i really like your poem it has alot of meaning and you seem to know about love yet it seems like you have been hurt... not knowing that kind of pain at least not that long length of time i sure do ache for you and am sry i hope things turn out ok keep wrighting i'm sure it helps alot...
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Well thank you, I appriciate your feedback.
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this is a good write,it could be formed into a song if you put in a chorus,emotional...seves its purpouse...thanks..return critique?
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Thank you for your feedback, I agree.
coolchick
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