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The Locked Door of Quietness

The day was beautiful
but as usual
it can't just
stay that way.

I know I can't expect
to make everyone happy
to be friends with everyone
But I try, and then cry.

Cuz I make someone mad
step in where I shouldn't
should stay behind
the locked door of quietness.

Can't change who I am
but just want to say
I will still love you
love you in every way.

Author notes

Sorry, kind of a sad one.
Written May 7th, 2003

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  • SithNichole
    January 15, 2005
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    bravo

    this is a wonderful poem! u are a good poet! keep em come'n!