[verse 1]This feeling, like a never ending shiver
A question lingering on the tip of my tongue
I wish I knew how to look you in the eyes,
But there will never be an easy way to make you see…
This place, getting colder with every breathe
Slowing the breathing, maybe I can hide here
Tired of being in the spotlight, I am so lost,
I can’t even see you because I know how I will make you feel…
[bridge 1]I wait here with no hope
I get close here but run
I won’t hurt you
But I know it’s all I know how to do…
[chorus 1]I want to take you off my mind
I want to send your memory away
I wish I could make all this pain disappear
But without you in my mind
I feel as though something might be missing…
I know I will never forget you,
So please don’t forget me too
I know this is all I’ve got
So I will lay it down on the floor
And I’ll wait for you to stop me from running,
I’ll wait for you to come back home…
[verse 2]Beautiful is such an over rated word,
If you knew anything about the life I lead
You wouldn’t be so quick to apply this title,
This title I wear as a noose around my neck…
These bruises, scar under the skin
That holds these frail bones together, fragile
This night is so young; I will not ruin your smile
I can’t taint that frail look of innocence I see in you…
[bridge 2]I will be here you know
I will get out of here
I won’t hurt you
But I know it’s all I know how to do…
[chorus 2]I want to rid this memory from my mind
I want to heal these wounds
Dug with the weight of time at the shovel,
Please kiss me with your poison lips
And please let me sleep tonight
I know I will never forget you
So please don’t forget me too
I know this is all I’ve got
So I will lay it down on the floor
And I’ll wait for you to stop me from running,
I’ll wait for this nightmare to end…
[ending]Fuck me
Break me
You know you haunt me
I wish you’d kill me!
Pleading
Begging you
To take what’s left of me
And tear it apart!
[repeat chorus]
Author notes
It's been a hard last 4 months
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Amazing
I hope I made it better
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honey, trust me when i say the pain will get better. it may not seem like it now but the heart has an amazing ability to heal again.
my strength to yours
The Goddess
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amazing as always
So first of all this song is very long but I really enjoyed it. the ending was especially well because it was so simple it completely rounded off the song in a very linger way. That is to say you remember the emotions. Its also, of course, a song that many people can relate to much like the rest of your work. I also really enjoyed verse 2 I think this is because of the imagery and words that you chose to use to portray your emotions. Keepy it up and I will keep looking and enjoying!
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This place, getting colder with every breathe - breath
just that one word really a good dark song on love, nicely done. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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thanks
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wow i really liked it especialy where it said -i know i will never forget you so please dont forget me too- ive felt like that about a person...it was like...sum how i thought that knowing that i had sumday meant sumtin 2 him that i had left that special part of me with him would make me happier sumhow...really nice...
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just the wayiti s
thanks I am glad you got somethingout of it
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