Those days that i don't see you
I wait for those calls
I struggle through the day
You not speaking at all.
Those ringing tones
Through my ears
Then your voice....
And those tears.
My smile faids
And tears fall
My thoughts are racing
Do you want me at all?
The silence at the other end
It makes my mind wonder
How much do you really want me
And who is fonder.
Author notes
Just something I wrote to stop me from being up set and angrey
Please tell me what you think
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wow i like! i can relate to it too. I like the simplicity of it showing the raw emotion: also the rhyming - its rlly fitting. c'est parfait! mood is sad though
i know its hard bt u should learn 2 rely on yourself try not 2 b dependant on ppl esp MEN! because they alwys alwys lets you down at some point ceri. tk care and goodluck with things
love you xxxxx -
honest
tis sweet -
I know how you feel, I've been through this...When your not sure about how the person you love feels about you it is very hard...You can get through it and good luck! Good Write BTW!
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